Pushing My Self Portrait More

As I mentioned earlier on my blog, I wanted to push my self portrait more. To see what other things I could add, or try. And to show you what I have accomplished, I provided the comparison:

What I turned in for critique (without the words circling my head)

What I have right now

I started adding the neck into the portrait, as well as the shirt, so that it could connect with the neck. I still have a lot of ground to cover before the portfolio review, so I am doing what I can amongst my current projects for class. As well as re-editing a few other projects (almost done with those).